Umm... it's good, is all. I like the ending.
this is better
this is an example of something that can be looped continually in the background without being annoying, since it has a few variations. know what I mean? ("myth" was a bit repetitive)
Good for what it is
As far as it goes it's good, but... even if it can loop, it gets annoying as it is 8 notes total and only one instrument. You should develop it further, try looping it, then start to add other instruments over it, see how it sounds, and start making some riffs (you can get a lot of variety with even a few riffs).
(what program do you use? some people have problems with demo versions that won't let them save songs. There's free software like Buzztracker, it's not as visual, still it can do many of the same things as professional software).
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